Interesting.
Sounds a bit more like industrial then EBM to me. And, you know, you did put it under industrial. But I'm not sure the EBM tag is called for.
Contrary to everyone else, I think the "So let's talk about it." was fairly well placed. Although the second "Let's talk about it" could have been omitted. Did you record your own voice for it?
I think you may have overdone the distortion a bit as well. It's just a little too grainy.
But who am I kidding; it's still an excellent song. It has a nice rhythm and the instruments go well together. Keep it up!